Austen, Speare, or Something Else? Choosing a Mentor Novel

Novelists out there: Ever been asked to choose a “mentor” novel?

The intensive novel writing class I begin soon requires that I choose a mentor novel.  This is a novel that I have already read and loved for its style, genre, tone, plotting, humor, language, or whatever reason, and wish to emulate in some way.

Question is, what to choose?  What novels are educative for the writer learning her craft?

I can say what will not work.  My preference might be the Eliots and Tolstoys, but Middlemarch and War and Peace wouldn’t make good mentor novels.  At least, good mentor novels for the likes of me.  Why?  They are too long and too complex.  Normally, as a reader, I would consider these to be good qualities in a novel.  Who doesn’t love delving into the delightful complexities of an epic masterpiece?  But they fail as mentor novels because a writer would be hard-pressed to get their minds around the structure of those books.  And getting our minds around the structure of a book is what having a mentor novel is all about.

That being said, I’m toying with two novels right now:  Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice and The Witch of Blackbird Pond by Elizabeth George Speare.

Pride and Prejudice is an easy, obvious choice.  I love Austen’s novels and I know them well (maybe a little too well). She’s a master at characterization, and emulating her would also help me achieve my near-impossible goal of being funny (considering that I’ve boldly opined on the lack of humor in new Catholic literature).  Perhaps, with Austen’s help, I’ll dream up another Mr. Collins?

Pinched from here.

Pinched from here.

One can only hope.

My one objection to using Pride and Prejudice is that it’s everyone’s mentor novel.  Need proof?  The Elizabeth Theory.  Contemporary fiction has way, way too many Elizabeth knockoffs.   Other than Shakespeare’s Beatrice (Much Ado About Nothing), I cannot think of a single female literary character prior to P&P with the temperament and talent of an Elizabeth Bennett.  She became a type when she arrived on the scene – a beloved and much imitated type – and since then our female characters are measured according to the Pride and Prejudice standard.

My more pressing goal, however, is to work on plotting, and for that I can think of no better example than the Newbury Award winning novel The Witch of Blackbird Pond That Disney hasn’t already turned it into a movie is surprising, considering its vast popularity with fifth-grade teachers.  It’s a compelling and tightly written story set in colonial Connecticut, and the opening chapters are near perfection in its hook, establishment of the premise, characterization, scene structure, and foreshadowing. And, being a children’s story, the plot is easier to analyze.  Kit is another Elizabeth Bennett type, of course, but otherwise it’d be a great book to imitate.

How about you?  What novel (or book, for you non-fiction writers) would you choose as a mentor novel, and why?

A Child’s Book of Prayers

This is a beautiful book:

My husband found our copy at the used book store.  And what a find!  Michael Hague has arranged some of the best prayers the English language has to offer children and accompanied them with his beautiful, innocent artwork.

This is our son’s favorite prayer and page.  He likes the lambs:

This is my favorite page with a favorite poem, “All Things Bright and Beautiful”:

Which reminds me…  Roxane Salonen, a fellow contributor to CatholicMom.com, has recently written two interesting reflections on the transformative power of beauty, here and here.  Check them out!

Sticks, Snow, and the Delight of Being (with some links)

Our young son loves The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats.  It’s a good thing I also love this book, because he and I have read it, oh, 300 times in the last month.  Give or take.

“Crunch, crunch, crunch,” Ben says as I turn the page.

“That’s right!” I say.  “’Crunch, crunch, crunch, his feet sank into the snow…’”

Read more at CatholicMom.com…

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It’s been a busy day for children’s book out there in Catholic bloggy land.  Besides my article (with my misspelling of “piqued,” garh), check these out:

Oh, The Places You Will Go!

A Story Time Survival Guide

Books That Get Childhood Right

Ten Read-Aloud Books That I Could Read Over and Over

7 Quick Takes, 6/1/12: Anna Karenina Goes Crazy, But I Do Not

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I finished Anna Karenina Thursday.

Count Tolstoy, his wife, their son, and the dog. (Credit: WikiCommons)

Immediate thoughts, in no particular order:

a) This book makes much more sense as an adult woman, a wife, and a mother than it did as a high school senior.

b)  Anna, after stripping herself of everything else except Vronksy, has no personal resources beyond him and therefore devolves into a self-centered, needy mess.  Tolstoy sees this as the tragedy it is.  (Ahem, Stephanie Meyer…)

c) That being said, that it manifested in her jealousy of other women strikes me as false.  Her jealousy of his time and his outside pursuits seemed more true-to-life.

d) I have no patience for political discussion in literature. Levin and I are BFFs on this one.

e) Tolstoy is a genius when it comes to descriptive detail.  The man knows how to use an adjective.

f)  Want to study narratorial viewpoint?  I recommend reading Anna Karenina!

g) I liked the story.  Simple to say, but, really, how often do we like the stories we read?  I even teared up at a few Kitty and Levin scenes.  Tolstoy the Storyteller did his job.



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This week, seven-and-a-half years after our wedding, we received our last wedding present:

My dad built this bed for us.  Isn’t it awesome?  He finished the posts years ago but did not have the wood to complete the headboard.  Not only did he lose his supplier, but it’s just hard to find a piece of black walnut large enough for a solid headboard.  This piece has “character” (his words), but, honestly, we like it that way.  Thanks, Dad!


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In case you were wondering… our moving plans are coming along.  Thanks for asking.

We should close on our house at the beginning of July.  Then the contractor comes in and takes care of the wood floors, the windows, random odds and ends, like pulling out the ghetto shower stall in the corner of the middle bedroom.  Yeah.

My sister, in the meantime, will give birth to my little nephew and godson.  We’ll have a baptism.  And then… move!  We should be in Michigan the first week of August.


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You know what book is just awesome?  The Snowy Day by Ezra Jack Keats.

It’s good that I think it’s so awesome, because a certain little boy likes to read this book while sitting in a certain place training to do a certain thing.  (Hint:  it involves Big Boy Underwear.)  I read The Snowy Day, on average, eight times a sitting.  And I haven’t gone crazy yet.

Keats writes with a wonderful cadence:

“Crunch, crunch, crunch, his feet sank into the snow.  He walked with his toes pointing out, like this:
He walked with his toes pointing in, like that:
Then he dragged his feet s-l-o-w-l-y to make tracks.”

“A stick that was just right for smacking a snow-covered tree.”

“And he thought and he thought and he thought about them.”

Writing a good children’s book is an art akin to poetry, I think.

(Sitting here in my favorite coffee shop, I quoted those lines from The Snowy Day from memory.  Like I said, I haven’t gone crazy yet.  Yet.)


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Question:  How do you manage social media? 

I find that I simply can’t keep up with everything and still keep my mind clear and free and easy for writing (especially working on the novel).  Both Twitter and the blogosphere are something of a rabbit hole.  And then I want to get involved with discussion boards at the Catholic Writers Guild, but… media overload. There’s good stuff out there that I want to read and follow, but, how to prioritize?

How do you do it?  What are your tricks?


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I suspect that, for me, my social media issues are ones of temperament.  Though I can be loquacious among friends, by nature I’m an introverted melancholic. “Social” anything tends to stress me out at a quicker rate many others, I suspect.

That’s why I spend Fridays and most of Sunday almost entirely off-line.  I need to recuperate!  The imagination needs some happy space!  I need to read something in book form!


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Read this and other Quick Takes at Conversion Diary.  Thanks for hosting, Jen!

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